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    Chelseaís Eyes

    New song I've been working on, check it out and let me know what you think, any and all criticisms appreciated. Still working on the melody.





    Chelseaís Eyes
    © Josh Doughtie

    Verse 1:
    There she was listening to No Doubt
    With her blonde hair let down,
    Humming her favorite song

    Every moment elapsed
    Creating memories to last
    Like a glimpse of the stars at dawn

    Refrain:
    I donít know what it is
    But itís a feeling I canít resist

    Chorus:
    Must be Chelsea's eyes
    And thereís sweetness in her laughter
    Her smile's bright
    And itís a moment worth to capture
    It just feels so right
    These feelings getting stronger
    Itís her and only her on my mind


    Verse 2:
    When she does that high heel walk,
    After a long day of class and work,
    She tries to catch the bus on time,

    Sometimes Iím the lucky one,
    The bus is late, so we wait in the setting sun,
    And we talk till itís time for goodbye,

    Refrain:
    And for a moment that night,
    Itís then and there she shines,

    Chorus:
    Must be Chelsea's eyes
    And thereís sweetness in her laughter
    Her smile's bright
    And itís a moment worth to capture
    It just feels so right
    These feelings getting stronger
    Itís her and only her on my mind


    Bridge:

    Like mesmerizing imagery,
    Sheíll have you lost in a gaze,
    But it would be misery
    If I went a week without seeing her face,

    Chorus:
    Must be Chelsea's eyes
    And thereís sweetness in her laughter
    Her smile's bright
    And itís a moment worth to capture
    It just feels so right
    These feelings getting stronger
    Itís her and only her on my mind


    Yeah itís her and only her on my mind

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    Uhmmm wow! I'd say you got Taylor Swift beat on songwriting abilities! I love it!

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    hahaha Thank you,

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    wondering when we were gonna get a new one from you! wonderful as always!

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    Thanks!


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